You like me and i like you
but its unexpressable that how much i like you,
the foods may not the liking of me liked by you
but i will love always as much as you,
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This one is also very good i like how deep you bring it. I like how you make it personal to the reader. I have a couple of new ones up and i have to add three more but if you could read them and let me know what you think that would be great. Be honest. Ashley
Excellent, well penned and poignant write which shows to me that you have what it takes to make it through the Poetry World: TALENT! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always!