Saturday, April 27, 2019

You May Propose, I Dispose Comments

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No we're prime, persisted the senses,
Riled red, agitated
For a prime place ahead,
Ego felt, it's him that disposes.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rajnish Manga 27 April 2019

Soul warned all: hold thine hackney horses, Better stay within your defences.... //..... Thanks for the poem and the Notes. They carry a sublime message.

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 April 2019

It is nice to see your comments after a long time, Rajnish Manga.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2019

I have stored in my mind...man proposes, God disposes! This is the theme of this amazing Limerick sir....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 April 2019

Soul is the enabler but not the doer, only a witness. If it were a little more assertive, may be, most of the ills could be wiped out. But, but...Thank you Dr Swain.

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