im not having a good day,
so please quit trying to make me smile.
i dont want you to care so much
could you just quit for once?
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Nice one. Esp. the BA-DUM THUD, THUD. It is really good to put some humorous phrases in poems. lol. it reallly makes me smile
i like that one, i love the suprise ending, the situational irony, it made me laugh out loud.