Friday, October 30, 2009

You Make Me Smile Anyway Comments

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im not having a good day,
so please quit trying to make me smile.
i dont want you to care so much
could you just quit for once?
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Erika Michelle
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David Sabo 21 December 2009

i like that one, i love the suprise ending, the situational irony, it made me laugh out loud.

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Sherbanu Molu 24 November 2009

Nice one. Esp. the BA-DUM THUD, THUD. It is really good to put some humorous phrases in poems. lol. it reallly makes me smile

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Ramesh T A 04 November 2009

Nice to read your poem! It makes me smile! Best wishes!

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Erika Michelle

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