Thursday, April 26, 2018

You Made The Crab Dance! Comments

Rating: 5.0

You fished me!
you fished me
out of my water element: —
you caught the crab!
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 April 2018

With loving and charming words you have brilliantly expressed this perceptional poem. Hope of gelatinous gentleness, timidity, and hesitation many readers witness. Even inside suffocated love mind swims. But love is love. This is caught with emotion. This is an amazing poem very brilliantly penned...10

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Hazel Durham 29 April 2018

Wow! ! Brilliant write of emotional angst and a complex relationship all consuming and a mixture of love and hate, wonderfully written so creative. It is one of my favourite poems!

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