Thursday, January 12, 2012

You Made Me Smile Comments

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You made me smile today
And I'm smiling still.
I was cold and my sky was grey
But you removed the chill.
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Sylvia Lukeman
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Jasbir Chatterjee 24 November 2019

Very nice read, Sylvia! Keep writing..

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 January 2012

Wow! Excellent write indeed, you just made me smile too...ha ha!

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Saintdc Reward 25 January 2012

i first read ur poem when it was sent to me as a newsletter through my email..but after i was done reading it, i couldnt help myself but come back to poemhunter to read more from you..im writing this post coz im truly impressed.

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Ifedayo Oshin 25 January 2012

great poem Sylvia! short and simple.. it speaks from the heart to the heart! the rhyme and rhythm are prim and proper... some things poem do so well...

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Wahab Abdul 21 January 2012

really you made me smile today giving me such a beautiful, little but powerfully sweet poem..as a gift.....my gray sky glowing today as i never read such excuisite poem before.....thanks a lot......please read my other poems

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