Wednesday, November 4, 2009

You Made Me Love You.... Comments

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There is no other way to explain how you make me feel inside
When I am with you it is not easy to hide
....because you make me love you
Maybe these feelings are true because I only want to be with you
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Dev Robinson
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 November 2009

Too many cliches, and mundane parlance, yet quite lyrical in style...Open up...there are no limits on Literatures creative spectrum. You have a decent foundation to work with...Read your contemporary Poets, and take heed to, and explore style & more capturing language...Good Luck & keep that pen pumping, young man. F j R

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