You Made Me Know Comments

And now I am the one who is lost..

Unfolded mystery! Thanks for sharing.

'I was the one, who used to look at the sky as a white space You came and made me see how curious and colorful it is' ... a pleasure reading.

Looking into the white sky it may be changed into white blue or pale yellow then into red hot disappears and see the darkness behind sir

I was a tiny bud afraid to blossom in this barbaric city You came and made me feel chivalric and free Beautifully written love poem full of feelings. Well done Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

I think it is a love poem......

[I was a *sadonist* staring myself as the fading fumes of a candle] : this is a very lyrical image... ...but I don't catch your meaning for *sadonist*... my fault.. Can you explain? Thanks