Monday, December 29, 2008

You Made Me Feel Red (For H.) Comments

Rating: 3.5

Like a strawberry you are always red
Like a pink flower when you blush
I felt your heart as my bed
And your hands my paint brush
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Noha Ewies 04 January 2009

If I had read this poem before knowing that it's YOU who wrote it, I would have figured out that IT WAS YOU! ! ! Alaa.. the girl in red! ;) Coco moot! I loved it! !

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Me Myself 31 December 2008

it's wonderful...... 'your heart is my bed'....... it's so...... red..... :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 December 2008

Hey your poem is as sweet as strawberry. I like them till I feel I can touch them.Keep writing Alaa!

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