Sunday, November 29, 2009

You Loved Me! Comments

Rating: 5.0

For the first moment I saw you,
What I saw felt untrue,
I walked further,
And closer,
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Sherbanu Molu
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Fine and happy finish carried me all thru the poem till last line…thanks sharing 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Eyan Desir 30 November 2009

Wow I hope this is a true story... good job

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Sherbanu Molu

Sherbanu Molu

Mombasa, Kenya
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