Sunday, August 7, 2011

You Lose, Andrew Comments

Rating: ★5.0

It's over now and the sun is out
And now there's a different view
Of what there was and what is left
From Mother Natures child, Andrew.
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Gordon Jackson
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Juan Olivarez 18 August 2011

Very well written, the stanzas are just right, and the rhyming scheme works well, good job, deserves a ten.

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Gordon Jackson

Gordon Jackson

Troy, New York
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Troy, New York
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