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... Savage... Raw... Intense... A catharsis? Your poem brought to mind a 'situation' in N.Y.C., decades age, whereupon 37 (I believe) people (people?) watched a young woman being attacked, and, eventually, murdered. I've long forgotten her name (I believe her first name was 'Kitty') , but I found your stark condemnation / damnation to be apropos. I will not be intrusive. I will be typically honest and non-patronizing. From my perspective, and irregardless of direction of content, and (respectfully) suggestive of a few simple word substitutions and polish, this is one heck-of-a very fine poem!