Monday, December 7, 2009

You Look Away Comments

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You look away
To the eavesdropping trees
And exclaim harshly
At my feelings.
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Dennis Go
Feelings
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nature 360 10 January 2010

I never suggest a change; but find the 'of 'out of place in the second last line. You have captivated the scene extremely well within the short poem. Congrats, may you always write with the emotional charm you display. -Jai

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Dennis Go

Dennis Go

Manila, Philippines
Dennis Go
Dennis Go
Manila, Philippines
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