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I saw... twas not for me to interpret your deliberations... just the acceptance to listen to what has been written.. keep Righting them One Peace at a time.. Deana PS....misfits among everyman... heeheehee... this belongs on the 4ham.....

Wow...loved this write of yours! ....these lines especially........ Wave after wave, like Programmed ululations on vinyl, way BEYOND THIS POINT at a speed yet to be defined, even in Arabic numbers, & played backwards.

The wellness ones stay with the merchandise, guarding the dust and radon...titters like the fire that rolled over Alexandria! Tongue-in-cheek images of amazing, memorable proportions! How true those images/statements are! Your song of rebellion is steel-strong, current, past, and future! Love this and everyone should read this one! ! ! Great! ! xxElysabeth

Now that is a grand write. Excellent piece.

An intriguing poem, refreshing and allowing me, the reader, to interpret it MY WAY. Great. There is a discipline in this and a feeling of the writer's confidence reminding me of the man going out in public with a new and controversial suit (purple perhaps?) and feeling supremely in command. I will now read more of yours. Best H