Tuesday, June 10, 2008

You'Ll Never Know This Pain Comments

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Can you turn this world around?
Can you right my life from upside down?
Can you crash through fear of that night,
Putting things in order, making things all right?
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jess schwarcz
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Lyn Paul 03 October 2015

We cannot feel another's pain but the want to help others when they have pain is certainly there. Heartfelt are your words and may you find strength. Thank You

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Alyza RealOne 10 June 2008

i like it (its kind of sad) but still good I also like the way you word things (its creative)

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Hana K 10 June 2008

it's a sad poem sorry i cant say more than that due the lack of vocabulary

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