Wednesday, August 13, 2008

You'Ll Never Know Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I’m sorry you’ll never know
Cause from your life you’ve severed me so
Severed me so I may never harm again
Severed me so I may never be a friend
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Timothy Weiermann
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Madison Yeater 10 March 2009

im sorry you'll never know.... yeah, some dont know of the pain they cause to ones heart, splitting it into two. it can be a horrible thing.. and just the thought of being a victim of the pain they are trying to perform on you is just heartbreaking. i give you a 10+ as it strikes my heart. nice piece.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

'As the colors of a memory age And the painting starts to fade'... So lovely, so beautiful that I also added 10 to it.

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 02 September 2008

niiiiice great poem a ten from me!

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great job! ! ! i loved it! ! ! gets a ten from me.........thanks for sharing it! hugs, gracie

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Robert Rorabeck 22 August 2008

read all your posted poems.... great work- i hope you keep writing

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Clarissa Tobey 19 August 2008

don't say never because thats a long time just let her know.. 10%

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Anjali Sinha 19 August 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful words. If I’m sorry you’ll never know Cause from your life you’ve severed me so ' Dont grieve my dear so much---there are lots of other lovelies out there.++++++++++++++10 love anju

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

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