Its there.
So close you can almost
touch it.
You can smell it and almost
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Oh Dan! This is yet again a poem I could relate to in my life, the words are so beautiful and the feelings it stirs up are magic. So to keep harking on about it but you really do have a way with words that I envy you for! ! keep at it!
Im sure your getting tired of my compliments... but ur a great poet and this one really got to me... I'll tell you why later. But i love this poem and the ever existant truth-wrapped-in-beauty essence that comes with all of your poems great job love it and u lmeao ttyl Missy
P.S. You grabbed my attention from the title to the last line....excellent.
If any body hit it right on the nail..you did in this extraordinary piece. I really enjoyed reading it and concurring.
A reflective write that held me to the very last, satisfying line. Excellent. Kind regards, Justine.
manacles are wrought from the strongest fresh air your imagination can find ..... excellent i enjoyed this one very much, you bring it full circle at the end & i was enraptured up until the last line. best care, SuS.
This is so true, being scared of love.