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Love will take us through the boredom of life's mundane streets. No worries

heartfelt lines...beautiful in its own way. A lovely poem 10++

How wonderful it feels when someone writes straight from the heart..

This is an awsome read, every line resonates with complete truth, its funny and heart breaking at the same time, most of us never set our goals high enough to live, but who needs rewards when the best thing is to live with integrity and tenacity. Worth a 10

If you can't be with the one you love...

You and me too Ruby - I think many of us can relate to this. Perhaps we are all special in our own little way though. Excellent write.

Ah bless! This did make me chuckle!

Lovely writing................

Hi, Ruby, again. Do you check your inbox? Because I sent you an email. Second, this is a great poem, and I agree with Lyn.10/10 And last of all, I have done a new poem called 'Not A Single Tear', and I invite you to read it, as well as other people that visit this poem. Thanks, Tiegan.

Love that title-it sums if all up very well. Your mix of humor with pathos was very clever. Just a good old down to earth write and well done.

Sensitive observations, and a well written interpretation. It's not you, and it's not me. Not a trace of beige on our ceilings :)

Wonderful to read Lisa and i love the humour in this and of course the enlarged BUM, that deserves a 10. Well done. Trying to give it a 10 but it will not allow? HELP