Wednesday, April 5, 2006

You'Ll Catch Your Death Comments

Rating: 4.4

Days like this day: no Manna from heaven-
my mother’s voice is the rain
tapping against the windowsill because
I left the window open last night, all night
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Amberlee Carter
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Brian Dorn 22 April 2006

Amberlee, your poetry has an emotional quality few can compare to. It is quite extraordinary in that it combines maturity, vulnerability, strength, and despair. Exceptional writing! ! Brian

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Seán O' Muiriosa 18 April 2006

This sadness you write with touches something at the very core, inexplicable.

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Uriah Hamilton 06 April 2006

Dark and forboding, beautiful in painful sadness! !

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