You Lied To Me Comments

This is part of life, as growing up slowly teaches everyone. Forgive him and move on. Failing to forgive and move on only injures your hurt more. Well-written 10/10...

Pretty good! That twist at the end really made the poem. Read mine - Death of Innocence - Adeline

Hey Shelly, nice poem. It could use a little more imagery though. Try showing not telling what you feel in the poem. Other than that it was good. I always have trouble writing anything more than a few stanzas so I commend you on the length of the poem especially. Emphatically yours, Calico Jack