Monday, April 3, 2006

You Lied.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

You lied once but i took you back
Our love grew and thats a fact
But you broke my heart to many times
I sit and wonder why i even try
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amanda mangano
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Red Blooded Black Hearted 22 October 2006

That was a great poem, it's a shame ppl can be so un0honest.

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Geoffery Tarquin 10 April 2006

This is a great poem! (although, i know this is silly but meant is spelt with an a, in English, i don't know about American English though: S) anyway I really like the sudden contrast between the depression of cutting wrists to the jubilation of the copule realising they love each other! Ecellent!

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