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Very touching.. But brother do u think u can curse the one u love.. Naa u can't because its u only who loved her so lot.. But it pains so much when u remind her second by second.. Is'nt? God bless u smile4ever

I hate lairs...these ppl never deserve any one's love...and i think this single poem can make them realize their mistake...i kindly liked it...

realllyy greaaaaaat! ! u seems deeply hurted! ! ! ! ! ! sry for that! ! keep it up! ! thnks for sharing it! !

Has some real depth and hatred. So much emotion! I love the last part! !

'Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you' such a fitting finale to your poem i loved the ending. ++++++++10 regards anju

a poetic judgement on an insincere love...gives interesting reading...9

You said 'I love you' But you lied i don't know why people don't mean it sometimes when they say these three innocent words 'i love you' extremely well done....keep going...10 Hataw

Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you Fine lines....eternal Love is over rated and no matter how many time it is said It never comes true...Sad yet True

alas love is too often a fickle emotion and there might not necessarily have been an intent to decieve, this is a passionate poem with unrequited love and compassion, a romantic filled with emotions and notions

'Listen …….. I know it was a fault To praise my love for you The only thing you really love Is yourself, yourself and you' nice observation.

I really like this poem alot and it's really show your feelings good job, peace and love ;)

I know the feeling well.