Saturday, November 21, 2015

You Licked The Frozen Pole-Odd Comments

Rating: 5.0

they all laughed at the
stunt you fell for,
'it tastes like peppermint
when it gets cold'
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Chuy Amante
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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2015

Outstanding poem on love subject, your metaphor in this poem is amazing and beyond doubt one of your best poem...10+++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Learning to count emotion on this sharing is wonderfully and metaphorically presented. Very amazing.10

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