You Lay Your Hands... Comments

it wouldn't be THOSE places that i'd be touching! either it is a long time since we touched base [ and i never got past first base with you ] OR i am getting old! ! or both? ? ? i could NOT think of your name at first. finally the Aitken popped into my teeny-weeny brain. and before i had a search-list to stare at, your first name made an appearance in my thick skull! ! all kidding aside, i like this poem, even without rhymes! favorite lines: ....my safety place for in your hands, I'll always be. where love and safety comfort me. ;) EVEN THOUGH it is too close to a love poem for MY TASTE, i'll send it to MyPoemList. bri ;)

Brilliant and caring words, a joy to read.

So important to me too as I am very tactile. Yes, this is a very beautiful poem. Loved it.

My tears! ! ! Thanks for sharing.