I told you I was in love,
But you laughed and
Laughed and laughed.
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You laughed at my song, You laughed at my walk, Then I danced my magic dance to the rhythm of the talking drums pleading. i danced my magic dance............ love this line in your poem. you are true in portraying the vows of a love relationship, a one way......... thank you. tony
A gentle and soft poem, Efe.....Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer
A lot of laugh- outcome is sorrow. Touching composition,10+
A beautiful poem about unrequitted love.