Monday, April 28, 2008

You Know How It Is Comments

Rating: 3.5

When words lose their meanings,
Nature loses its charm,
The sky reduced to triviality...
Then you know, then you understand –
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Julsera Wang
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Irene Pang 04 May 2008

A short poem that touches on the heart of others! I really like how you use the literary feature of 'oxymoron' for 'the light of tacit night.' However, you did not apply the same feature for the previous phrase. But I guess that is not necessary since there are no sets of rules for poem writing eh? Congrats again!

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