You Kissed Me Comments

This is really sweet! ! ! ! I love it! ! ! I just have one suggestion, last year in my English class we worked for a long time on 'Exploding the Moment' and adding a lot of detail so that a short period of time can take pages and pages to describe, and I think this could maybe be a bit more powerful if you gave some more detail, and made the middle longer. Just a suggestion. GREAT WRITE. Rach

I really like this one. I like the ending. nice piece.