You Killed Me Comments

I love the way shortness and catchiness of the first vereses followed by the repetition...that makes it very powerful :)

'..Painted by emotion With paints of words A brush of ideas On a canvas of paper.'A great, a wonderful poem! ! ! I think it's the second lyric poem that I've read from Emma.To express, to describe some feelings that we bring inside us it's not an easy skill, mainly in the poetic language.To change material things into ideas like 'a dark cold room, a winter' into 'loneliness', 'a spring' into 'a beautiful love', 'a broken mirror' into 'a broken heart' it requires from the poet to work on his imagination.The soft and beautiful way the poetry has got in itself, it distinguishes the poetry from another styles of writting like ficction, essay, drama and so on.Again, Emma, bit by bit, is defining her own way in the poetry.

I admire this fantastic poem.

I am amazed and stunned at the depth and meaning of which this poem has crept into my heart. 'You killed me Untouched Visibly unharmed You killed me With words Not actions With sound You killed me' Absolutely brilliant. I enjoyed every word of your poem.