Saturday, May 30, 2009

You Keep Your Lips And What's Behind Them Zipped Comments

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You keep your lips and what's behind them zipped.
No explanation do you give for this.
But then you expect understanding given for it.
And you're bottled up.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Colin J... 04 July 2009

Superb poem... 'The Silent Scream' comes to mind... Colin J...

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Sandra Martyres 30 May 2009

Every stanza of this piece is absolutely true...truly a great write with punchy repetitive lines for effect...10++++

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Luna Conley 30 May 2009

Nicely done. I definately feel the vibe.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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