Friday, February 29, 2008

You Jump Start My Heart Comments

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You jump start my heart dearest
Bring sunshine to a gloomy day
Your mine inspiration...
Though you live far away
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Ray Lucero
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Original Unknown Girl 29 February 2008

What a gorgeous piece of poetry! Love the title.. says it all. HG: -) xx

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Nomi Mas 29 February 2008

jump start coz of love's distance. first and last lines link up well for an excellent close (distance is related to jumpstarting)

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John Tiong Chunghoo 29 February 2008

love crosses ocean and land. love is in the heart and heart has no boundaries. it loves till the end of time dear ray.

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