Monday, September 18, 2017

You & I Comments

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YOU & I

I survive here somewhere
In a corner of the world,
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Khirod Dalpati
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Binayakumar Mohanty 20 October 2017

Nicely crafted poem. Deserves full mark 10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 October 2017

when you went abroad you did make friends it seems another day another time another moon soon will be with both her and thee take it easy she has gone with the wind!

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Khirod Dalpati 01 October 2017

Ha ha ha... Thank you for your comments.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 September 2017

Nice poem.. reminds me of the song YOU AND I popularized by KENNY ROGERS....

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Khirod Dalpati 19 September 2017

Thank You Sir, I have given the title after writing the poem. I hope it suits.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 September 2017

The title suits it best, Khirod..... Keep up the good work.....

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