.jpg)
You & I Comments
Making the best of what we had
Was our first deal. Pity it was not
Enough. Just a
Pre-destined route.
...
Read full text
A brilliant though quite sad love poem. So often this is what happens to love.
indeed love is a tale of happy and sad moments... isn't it? :) All the best, dear Michael.
I can only make the best of what I have if does not involve one thing - a soul is what I do not have to give. Fabrizio Frosini, keep up your work because you view is poetic therefore, beautiful.
Nice poem. Elegant and simply with a touch of longing. Thanjs for sharing
o song of togetherness no, no, never can decay the love of you and me without any heavenly bless..........//
Sad when two who loved each other had to end their romance. But the hears remembers, maybe some more than others. Beautiful work!
congratulations, four of your poems are in the first 12 places of the Top 500 Member Poems))) You and I is number 9, Nocturnal is number 1, Tenderness 3 and Beyond 12! beautifull))
I see you've commented on all those poems of mine :) thank you so much!
Ciao, 'leggiadra Gazzella' - charming Ghazal :) Thank you for reading and commenting on my 'You.&.I' I've read the seven poems you've posted here till this very moment: as I wrote, I'm on the same ''wavelength'' as Tom - but I already knew that you're a very good poet: a poetess whose poetry honors our anthologies!
Διακρινω μια μελαγχολία σε ένα ουδέτερο πια από συναισθήματα τοπίο. Η ώρα του αποχωρισμού έχει την οδύνη της έλλειψης των έντονων συναισθημάτων αρκετά οδυνηρό κι ας καλύπτεται στην ποίηση σας.Ευχαριστώ.
Σας ευχαριστώ για το είδος του σχόλιου για το ποίημά μου, αγαπητέ Μαρία Σκαρπαθιωτάκη It's very kind of you reading and commenting on my poem, and I am truly glad that you liked it. Thank you.
Beautiful narrative of a complex emotion that blankets us at times. Nicely worded.
When you feel intimate romance, however you don't know how to state the enchantment words let verse help! These affection ballads for him and her, are the ideal method to state I adore you.
A beautiful arrangement of words from one heart to another...white and clean
How strange I could cut open a brain look into hippocampus pituitary, amygdala frontal lobe, hypothalamus optic and auditory nerves name any nook any gyration I could dissect all but I could not detect your lies when you said you dearly loved me you left me without a trace my house is deserted now where there were roses in vases swarms of mosquitoes fly we loved Mozart and Ribaldi now when I come home I see our poodle sniffing your slippers, circling the bed and wondering why are you not here he runs to me and howls I loved you dearly, honestly, sincerely I do not know where I went wrong be happy with your new lover forget me, my life will move along your memories will remain with me forever...
Had read this lovely poem quiet some time back. Love really is a complex emotion. Even in separation it is there with many sided memories.like splinters on porcupine's back we carry it all.
Wow, beautiful narrative of the complexity of a love that borders on the verge of uncertainty..especially ''will we be together again''...brilliant, thanks for sharing!
Whom do you belong to? And I? You and I were together At the beginning, when that Song began. Will we be Together at its end? If not, there will always be The memory; Inextinguishable maybe As long as we're alive —You And/or I And nothing else. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Inextinguishable is the memory of love even in separation.Thank you Fabrizio for this wonderful poem.
thank you so much, dear Bharati. Looking forward to getting your poem for the 'Bitter Love' compilation [the title of the book will be 'When Love is Bitter']
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
7/25/2025 8:59:28 PM # 1.0.0
This is such a sweetly skill-inundated composition - penned with a confident delicacy of nuance and poetic rhythm doubtless rare these days...I particularly salute the author's multilingual versatility, too. Kudos, 'doctor' versifier!