Tuesday, October 22, 2013

You & I Comments

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Lives apart we stay together...
opinions different we stick around each other..
hardly do we share our thoughts...
seldom do we talk...
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Nivedita Patnaik
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Nivedita Patnaik 23 October 2013

Thanks Abhishek...for the response

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Abhishek Tiwari 23 October 2013

The fouth dimension is really difficult to keep at hand and that encroaches the other three dimensions... The nothingness created by times reciprocates itself into the distance.... waht a wonderful depiction of the situation... nice work...: -)

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Khairul Ahsan 22 October 2013

Feelings of void beautifully depicted.

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