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just wonderful! Chika OzeLess than a minute ago great work from an elder. lol! all the stanzas would do well on their own, which i like so much. however, mehta should be careful not be carried away by the sweet usage of idle words. always allow your stanzas to flow freely from one to the other. that is the bare essence of being poetic. -chika Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago thanks dear. i have developed technique where by each stanza stands separate and independant and at the same time maintain continuity.. enjoy poetry dear i am thankful for keen reading

nice lines... Frank MaximusLess than a minute ago sometimes we just need to be alone.. Comment 0 good

Tom Grove2 minutes ago good structure

You have preferred to be lonely In isolation readily and happily