Thursday, February 22, 2007

You Have My Attention Comments

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When you walk by and I can't help but smile
and I find myself awaiting your calls,
when you look into my eyes with that
look that says more than a thousand words
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Amanda Lukas
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Andre Yates 06 March 2007

Another good poem.. Thats the problem with the wold today is that we always fall victim to the games of playing hard to get... This poem shows that sometimes a smile is all you need to show that there is something there....

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Heather Mueller 22 February 2007

Very cute! I love it when people write poems like these, they are the ones that make you smile because of the greatest emotion that we have. Love. great poem, keep it up - Heather

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