Wednesday, March 18, 2015

You Have Killed The Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your eyes are searching,
Love that perch,
I am in search of me,
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Susan Williams 29 September 2020

The bird stole my song, I was the song, Now who will sing? - - > I liked the tone of this poem very much

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Elias Ng'ang'a K. 24 September 2016

A poem with an implied meaning., one of a kind., Alot of conclusions are in my head right now.

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Piyush Dey 23 March 2015

This is a very powerful poem. I liked the way you portrayed it, exquisite.

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