You Have Chosen Not To Come. Comments

i agree - a very well written poem! i love the rhythm the excellent title the words you are piausing and the way you express sadness through a pen Excellent! ! wishing you a joyful day-

I liked the fact that you left the lines incomplete, its a few sudden things. very well written though! Preets

perhaps that is the pain of creation.you have written it very well.good poem.i enjoyed it

Yes, this does happen occassionally... You expressed it so nicely. Anjana

i could feel it udit. floating curtain alone thinking of a tanka