Tuesday, May 27, 2008

You Have... Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have eyes that sparkle like stars
when you look at me, my heart feels locked behind bars.

You have a voice that is strong and sweet
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Tiffanie Austin
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Aaron Kaarnes 23 December 2009

this poem is nice i love the expression, the information percieved, and its colorful impression. That kesav dude or wutever needs to go... O.O

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2009

you go expressive eloquent there on how you 'feel' your 'love'...sweetly reflective Tiffanie...the words get personified there...provide vivid image good composition rhyming rhythmic...10

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