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Sara, Thanks dear for the comment.Yet, When I have any feeling of sorrow i go and write it down..I'm the type who isnt a multitasker who can add metaphors and similes w.sorrow poetry.. I cant do more than one..If I wanna express about sorrow, happiness, joy..It has to come from my heart...If you read more of my poems..I have used metaphors and imagery...In many..See The poem: Excuse me, I'm Human..And further more..<3 Really i thank you from all my heart..&& I hope that i continue my poetry and take your advice...Surely i will..I'm Still In 8 grade...<3 && I will try my best..Thanks again, dear..

I feel so much pain in your poetry. I think its very expressive, however to draw the reader further more I recommend you try adding imagery, metaphors and similes in to paint a more imaginative and creative feeling. :)