You have good diction and you express yourself well but this is not really poetry. The best way to write good poetry is to read good poetry. This is actually good prose. Poetry should hint at your subject and the format should have as much impact as the words. I wish you all the best with your ambition to become a writer.
Adeline
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You have good diction and you express yourself well but this is not really poetry. The best way to write good poetry is to read good poetry. This is actually good prose. Poetry should hint at your subject and the format should have as much impact as the words. I wish you all the best with your ambition to become a writer. Adeline