You Go Alone Comments

This piece is great, inspirational even.

O, you wrote so long to test my patience. Verse is terse. see how terse my verse is. Tks.

I like that you write alot and enjoyed reading this. It's very discriptive and I'm learing to write more reading this. (: 10.

I like this poem...the most captured I´m : 'Make earnest effort and try very hard, Life may even last as you grow old, Youngsters may cut joke and laugh also elder, Task may get tough as you spread wider, '

You go for self and wait for none Fight it out all but one You may loose path but never be afraid River may change path and course not straight

Make earnest effort and try still harder, Life may even last as you grow older, Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder,

Make earnest effort and try still harder, Life may even last as you grow older, Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder,

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone, You may loose path but not you deter, River may change path or course even

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone,

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone, You may loose path but not you deter, River may change path or course even alter,

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone, You may loose path but not you deter, River may change path or course even alter,

Consider it a struggle but not path simple, Task you may have but not time ample, Life may be harsh even worst than the gamble, It may just be test and not like sample,

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone, You may loose path but not you deter, River may change path or course even alter

Make earnest effort and try still harder, Life may even last as you grow older, Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder,

You may loose path but not you deter, River may change path or course even alter,

Consider it a struggle but not path simple, Task you may have but not time ample,

You go alone and find no one, Fight you it out, but all alone, You may loose path but not you deter,

Consider it a struggle but not path simple, Task you may have but not time ample, Life may be harsh even worst than the gamble

Make earnest effort and try still harder, Life may even last as you grow older, Younger may cut joke and laugh to elder,

Things may prove hard like task Herculean, You may get bogged down and not come clean,