You Give Life To Me Comments
From the broken twigs
Like the milk in the moon
From the clouds in the night
You shape me
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Architect of passion giving life to me-beautiful well written
Poetry par excellence, perfect imagery, flow, rhyme and rhythm. Really flawless. I loved it from the core of my heart, don't know how to say it. CP
A very vivid word painting. You are an excellent imagist. Love, Sandrax
A sensitively penned devotional piece with some fine, inspired images. In particular I liked the 'milk in the moon' and 'a little bit of intrigue'. Excellent poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Broken ☽ beams ...........SO......... still on ♁ so silent ..NEXT TO THE. ebbing TIDE I await ..........IS MY....... ~~~~~~♀ ~~~~~
From the fibre of love From the strengh of mountains From suppleness of bamboo From innocence of child You weave my frame.............................Good Write.............
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8/5/2025 2:27:46 PM # 1.0.0
beautiful..... a nice poem to read Reshma! lovely work