Tuesday, June 2, 2009

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Caution the floors wet, been crying
I gave up so fed up of trying
To accept that gut renching truth ive been denying
To myself i need to stop lying
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jess deaves
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Angelic(Annie) Female 02 June 2009

Nice one- written straight from the heart and expressed beautifully.

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Keshav Prasad 02 June 2009

i like the style of your write....and the way the poem ends is good 'but hopefully i will be ok at the end of the line'

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