You Forgot To Remember Comments

D.A. Holmes: This is a very good work. Must add to my poem list. You do have some very good Haiku as well. Adeline

those smiles turn to deaf stones the kisses are simply glorified rocks yet chilled and free zed under the reminiscence time has forsaken to the shadow of archive and the butterfly has metamorphosed..................wonderful poetry, love when wistful by desire when assailed by its own roués and despair, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

'as i far as i can remember, i cannot recall'..yes, i pity the man...he is lost in oblivion

I like this one, the emotions of despair and desperation are very clear in so few words. -chuck