You fit into me
like a hook into an eye
a fish hook
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To is sin for sin will lead u into temptations that will leave u empty fish hook in the eye.. Want it taste it lead to pain. Distrust. Shame.
I really liked the poem very succinct and definitive. It doesn't leave much room for interpretation. Makes me think of The Handmaids Tale.
Here she goes again, unable to enjoy normal sexual relations, everything between men and women is a rape which must be overcome
A 10 Topscore for this entertaining poem. CONGRATULATIONS for being chosen as The Modern Poem Of The Day Hurray! I have enjoyed much this brevity. Not to exaggerate: I like very much reading all your poems, so very entertaining and a for my ears and eyes, Mrs. Atwood. God's Blessings.
Short thought provoking poem, a cute clear verse that can be explained in many ways. To my opinion: too many ways, since the list will be too long and no space enough if I start to write these kind of ways. Indeed You Fit Into Me, that's true poetically said. Thank you so much dear poetess Mrs. Atwood. I love reading all your poems, they fit into me.
" An open eye" ! To fit in. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Well said. First two verses must be sarcastic! I first got the fitting image of a eye and hook lock. The second image destroyed that one.
After a seven year itch, I believe, which may now even in three years reach.
like a hook into an eye.. a fish hook. short and sweet. tony
I had an exam and searched the shortest poem and found this can't thank her enough
I really liked it. I think people need to be a bit more positive in the commets tho. Like dude gayman69 if this poem sucks sooo bad! ? write your own.
Some of these comments proves shallow minded people..