You fill my soul with sunshine
my heart with tender care.
You fill my world with happiness
knowing that you are always there
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This is so beautiful that it left me breathless. I envision the smile of a dear friend when I read this. Thank you for writing it!
enjoyed this one, David..i can feel also that i was filled with sunshine everyday of my life..So loving and endearing..love it!
So rare these day to find someone still so deeply in love with the one they married.........utopia at it's finest....thanks for sharing....
As one whose favourite colour is YELLOW, I applaud this description of your lover and your love. Such a sweet, light piece straight from that place. love, Allie xxxx
Very nice work here, David...Tight, crisp versing...Mellifluous structural work...Quelling language, complimenting a serene storyline...Solid crafting. FjR
Very very nice and how fortunate are you to have this kind of love in your life..Hold on to it, , , , , for it is rare and not often found..........marci. :)
A beautiful poem flowing right through to the end, also a wonderful tribute to your Lady Love. Excellent my friend, thankyou--Melvina--
It is beautiful sweetheart.As is the lucky lady in question! That inner warmth of yours is VERY apparent. t x
The Sunshine of Love, a gift from the one above... A great poem for the one you love...10
This is what I imagine everyone strives for. Beautifully done. Ron