Friday, July 8, 2005

You Fell Comments

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You fell, my child,
I hope that little graze
on your chinnie-old chin
is not too serious.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Naveen Choudhary 08 July 2005

Sir Poem is well written. If almighty ask me to have a wish. I would have wished to rectify my past my evils my curses. But history never repeats. `

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 08 July 2005

such a sad touching poem Herbert....It is hard to make them think it will ever be alright again. Good Job!

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