You Fed Me Oranges Comments

A wonderful poem full of eros, romance, love and all that a human being wants in a relationship.. you are great romantic poetess.. thank u. dev

Now when I pass a fruit stand, How am I suppose to Hide my excitement? very good poem of romance, eros and love....... thank u dear poetess. tony

I am in awe of the way you move from one set of images to another, and so (apparently) effortlessly. It's so sensual, and so literate at the same time. The coda is delightful.

Sensual, juicy, seductive - you do this so well! It puts me in mind of Leonard Cohen's 'Suzanne' (it's those fabulous oranges) . I adore the wry smile of the closing lines - the fruits of passion - irresistable! S ;)

you can't! ! ......you will smile.....and oooooze with excitement! ;)

Ooh you sexy thing. Hope that orange stall isn't next to a bridge!