Tuesday, March 22, 2022

You Exist Like The Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

You don't exist
In vapours
In ambiguity of silent
Exhalations
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Nosheen Irfan
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Chinedu Dike 12 December 2022

Great lines of poetry

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soren Barrett 30 March 2022

A beautiful expression of the naturalness of love and relationship. Very well written

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 March 2022

Congratulations Nosheen. This poem ranks 42 in today's Member Poems. Most deserving.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 March 2022

Beautiful analogy to complement exquisite poetry.

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M. Asim Nehal 24 March 2022

Superb...You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 March 2022

I had posted a remark on the poem yesterday. But it does not appear here yet. What is wrong?

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 March 2022

Thank you sharing such beautiful thoughts, dear Nosheen. Enjoyed reading them.....10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 23 March 2022

You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return......fabulous lines of amazing truth.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 March 2022

Really a Nosheenic poem. Nostalgic of your earlier love poems. Extremely happy to see you back.

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Unnikrishnan E S 23 March 2022

Exquisite beauty of a poem. " You exist in my life / Like the air/ I inhale /Not knowing /It keeps me alive".. excellent sublime poetry. Loved reading.5 *s. Myfav.

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PA 22 March 2022

Magnificent poetry!

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Well Wisher 22 March 2022

This poem has the strength of language properly incorporated into each stansa.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 March 2022

a remarkable poem, a loveliest justified ode, a sterling poem to my heart,5 Stars full score, and myriads more

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Nosheen Irfan

Nosheen Irfan

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