You don't exist
In vapours
In ambiguity of silent
Exhalations
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A beautiful expression of the naturalness of love and relationship. Very well written
Congratulations Nosheen. This poem ranks 42 in today's Member Poems. Most deserving.
Superb...You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return.
I had posted a remark on the poem yesterday. But it does not appear here yet. What is wrong?
Thank you sharing such beautiful thoughts, dear Nosheen. Enjoyed reading them.....10
You exist like the sun That comes to go And goes to return......fabulous lines of amazing truth.
Really a Nosheenic poem. Nostalgic of your earlier love poems. Extremely happy to see you back.
Exquisite beauty of a poem. " You exist in my life / Like the air/ I inhale /Not knowing /It keeps me alive".. excellent sublime poetry. Loved reading.5 *s. Myfav.
This poem has the strength of language properly incorporated into each stansa.
a remarkable poem, a loveliest justified ode, a sterling poem to my heart,5 Stars full score, and myriads more
Great lines of poetry