Saturday, February 26, 2011

You Exist In His Presence Comments

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Even as you garner points after points
Your opponent draws a blank
Wouldn't your conscience spare him a point?
Then what of the Invincible?
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Saju Abraham
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Jameel Ahmed Ansari 26 February 2011

Your poem really speaks volumes of human nature. The desire for more never ends. The expectations never recede. Money, the more it comes the more you want..when it comes to spending at the crucial junctures or helping the needy we back out.. Your poem has really brought out real facts.. Really superb way to display your thoughts..Will definitely read your other poems too.Thanks..

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Alwaye, Kerala, India
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