You Dont Need A Gun... Comments

you capture the reader from the start. top to bottom a great piece. nice work

that was phenomonal... i can dig it... a poem well writtin by a gr8 poet! ! keep it movin

you makes a dreamy world here After a year of happiness, making memories, laughter, earth shaking, hand holding, mountains exploding, comets shooting, birds singing, and love, you still shattered my dreams.

thats deep no doubt about it. so descriptive as well. i like it keep doin ya thang -mel

i love the way you put it. break ups are always bad. good write.

Very deep - & tragic that the hurt goes deep too.

Astonishing. Simply Beautiful.

Wow, it actually does not get any deeper than that, the listing does a great job in strengthening your writing, great write...